Why Sharper Statements

Proven Results

Results matter, but context does too. These numbers come from sharp strategy, real collaboration, and a process that doesn’t cut corners.

  • 2021–24: 47% T14 admit rate (~17% public average).
  • Lowest LSAT into Harvard: 164.
  • Lowest GPA into a T62.97.
  • 2020–23: 10 of 13 clients who applied ED to Penn Law got admitted.
  • Clients have earned top scholarships: Hamilton & Butler (Columbia), Vanderbilt (NYU), Levy (Penn), Karsh-Dillard (UVA), and more.

Unmatched 1:1 Commitment

My process is built for my clients. Here’s what working together looks like:

  • You work with me and only me. No subcontractors. No editors. Not even an admin. Every client I take on works directly with me from start to finish.
  • I’m accessible. I respond to urgent texts and calls, even nights and weekends. You won’t wait 24-48 hours.
  • I’m a brainstorm machine. We’ll dive into your life and pull out the most strategic narrative threads, then build a cohesive arc around them.
  • I provide a level of editing no one else does. Line by line. Whether it takes 7 drafts or 30+, I’ll keep grinding.
  • I care about your success. I work with a limited number of clients and give each one personalized attention.

Curious how this actually plays out? Here’s my detailed approach.


What Sets My Admissions Consulting Apart

FocusMeOther Coaches
Voice & ToneDistinct for each client. I inhabit your voice to make your essays shine.Generic, overly polished, or flattened into set tone.
Narrative BuildingI help you build a real arc from lived experience to insight to law. Strategy and story go together.Often focused only on grammar and syntax, not narrative and cohesion.
Editing DepthI rebuild and revise entire essays. 30+ drafts? No problem.Many stop at 3-5 rounds of comments or edits.
Creative FluencyTrained in rhythm, persuasive writing, client narrative. Emotional intelligence meets structural command.Typically editorial, not generative. Less creative range across formats.
Client FitEvery essay is shaped around your life, values, and goals—not just what sounds impressive.Often relies on plug-and-play “hooks” or recycled essay structures.
Feedback TimingHigh-quality revisions delivered quickly, even under pressure.Longer delays, less flexibility in crunch time.

Substance Over Sameness

I’m not here to crank out generic advice or manufacture statements that all sound the same. I work with a limited number of applicants each cycle, and I get to know them well. I listen closely. I push when necessary. And I make sure every line we keep actually earns its place.


The Sharper Statements Difference

I don’t just want your essays to sound good. I want them to truly reflect your story, your clarity, and your strongest voice on the page.


If you want to learn more about my process or set up a consultation, contact me here.