Before working with Moshe, I had been working with another consultant on essay editing. I knew my story wasn’t super strong or persuasive, but didn’t know how to improve it. My previous advisor had told me my personal statement was fine, and only gave me edits that were focused on grammar and flow.

Once I started working with Moshe, my entire personal statement changed for the better. He helped to build a narrative around why I truly wanted to practice law and why I want to do so now. His onboarding process was super helpful in getting me to self-reflect on the experiences that had built my “why”. He also helped me to weave that story into all my application materials from the diversity statement to school specific essays. It also helped massively during interviews that I could so clearly articulate why law school and why now.

I had a 175 with a 3.76 GPA with no strong softs at a small state school in the Midwest. Moshe helped me to craft a narrative that was compelling, and helped me to get into schools I would’ve never dreamed of getting into when I started this process like Penn, Michigan and UVA. In the end I ended up getting accepted into 8 T14s, most of those offers including scholarships.

Moshe pushed me to present the best application I could. The reason why I chose him over other advisors is because of his brutal honesty. He will be your biggest critic, but also your biggest supporter! I truly could not have gotten to where I am without his guidance and support.

Working with Moshe was so helpful for me because fundamentally, Moshe works well both in every detail as well as in forming a cohesive big-picture narrative with every part of the application. Moshe’s consistent stream of texts and voice memos reflect his constant willingness to answer a question or look at a new draft of an essay, and he also holds you accountable to presenting the best application you possibly can.

Moshe is incredibly thorough in his process of working with a client, and especially for someone who came into the application process not knowing much aside from the fact that I wanted to go to law school and had taken the LSAT, I really appreciated Moshe getting to know my story in order to find what parts of my life worked together and made sense of law school in my future. I ended up loving my statements and felt they deeply reflected the truest reasons why I want to go to law school. As an additional benefit, working with Moshe to craft the best statements made it much easier to speak in interviews on what areas of law interest me and how I see law school aligning with my future goals.

My results spoke for themselves: I was admitted to Stanford, UChicago, UVA (+ Karsh-Dillard), Berkeley (+ Berkeley Law Opportunity Scholarship), and two other T14 schools.

The only caveat I’d give overall to taking Moshe’s advice on any essay is no one knows your story as well as you, and I had to find a balance at times between when I didn’t want to exactly go with his every suggestion and when I was fine to take his advice. As long as you are as honest and clear with him as you can be, Moshe leaves room for consistent discussion and finding the right wording or structure to essays that you both can agree on.